Something About A Smile

by Meena Krish   May 21, 2010


A smile gently opens
the petals of your heart
its delightful shine
macerates your woes

The beauty of a smile
glitter like stars
and guides you into
hope's embrace

A smile brings in
waves of comfort
the breath of relief
which bathes your world

It's a beautiful sunset
that sedates the mind
where thoughts flower
of new beginnings

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  • You have described the quality of a smile just beautifully. 5/5

  • You have described the quality of a smile just beautifully. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Wow, What a beautifully descriptive analogy of a smile , I really enjoyed this one .
    I also liked how it showed the progression of a smiles cause & effect , reading like a little mini story . Very well written definately a 5/5
    Grant Gilbert & I co wrote one about passing a smile along titled :--Climb On Board

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    I do agree with you dear...You just gave me a smile through this beautiful poetry...God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 13 years ago

    by Lana

    A smile is something that costs nothing to give but could feel like a million dollars to someone who is feeling a little down.

    Very good word choice in this lovely verse.