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by Rania Moallem Aug 25, 2010
Life, society /
Bring me the sunset in sleeping cups
let night gently pour, as light fills up
spill it in, with the deepest tranquility
as my astonished eyes sink in ecstasyHold it like a fair diamond in the hand
shining like gold, as dry summer sand
sip me freedom, as I sip the soft power
that lays within the magic of its colorBring me the sunset in treasured cups
let night shake, as morning brightens up
touch my senses, for the heart to leap
dress me yellow rays, let sorrow sleep
as I listen to the ripples of its orange fall
drown me with beaming memories I recall.
As for my lonely tired eyes, and thirsty lips
bring me a cup lightened by sunset drips ..By: Rania Moallem
for a contest
by Zia Mikaela
Intelligent, delightful and vivid. I love it!
by Thungchio Kithan
interesting specially the last para
by Aureus Argentum
This piece holds such imagery. It is really good. :-) Well done!
by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit
"As for my lonely tired eyes, and thirsty lips
bring me a cup lightened by sunset drips .."
yes mam...consider it done!....;~)
by tainted melody
This was amazing, and I hope it won the contest you entered it in. I loved this a lot and I think the symbolism and descriptiveness fit perfectly... sometimes everything just works. ^_^