by Sunshine Aug 25, 2010
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Bring me the sunset in sleeping cups |
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Wonderful poem. I especially like the second stanza, “shining like gold, as dry summer sand”. |
by Sunshine
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So happy to see more people from the WritersCommunity here really! Welcome and thanks a lot for your kind words! Welcome to P and Q !! |
by Zia Mikaela
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Intelligent, delightful and vivid. I love it! |
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interesting specially the last para |
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This piece holds such imagery. It is really good. :-) Well done! |
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"As for my lonely tired eyes, and thirsty lips |