God is amazing isn't he?? i was so exited reading this poem for many reasons. One, because another young person was writing about God, Two, the whole message was dead on! and Three, it brought comfort to me!
I get upset sometimes when people bash the bible without reading it or studying it themselves. More than half the time they have no idea what they are talking about. They are missing theese beautiful scriptures like you pointed out. its really sad.
Keep your faith. Keep reading the word. Never let the enemy seal your joy! Gods given you a talent to write, use it for him. This was awesome!