A New Year Dawns

by Lonely Rider   Dec 30, 2010


Shimmering on the brows of a new dawn,
.blends of yesterday .......and tomorrow.
..Unfurl wings of dreams... painted by
....subtle thoughts from.... palette of
........vibrant ....unceasing ......time
...........Soaking ......with delight
................hopes.......desires,
.......................-limitless-
..........................Rises
..........................morn

...........................May
.....................smiles and
..................joys ...flourish
..............with each... passing
...........moment .........adorning
.......your life with love-- profound,
.....good fortune ......follow around,
...wish a hundred more photographs
..of merriment ....and joy find place in
your Album. Flavors saute a happy year.

Form Etheree and Shape Poetry (Shape of an Hourglass :) )

* I wish each and every member of P&Q a very happy and prosperous new year.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I love your layout! it is nice to see something different as we don't get much of a choice when it comes to layouts on here so well done for that

    Now as for the poem itself I found it really good I loved how you opened the poem and managed to keep me interested all the way to the end

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You are indeed the queen of shape poetry!! This is really excellent and I wish you a happy new year too!! Well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this piece Raj. I love the Etheree, and you make the shape poetry look so easy :)
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

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