Whiskey Drowns (Etheree)

by End Of Eternity   Apr 16, 2011


World
Choking
With freedom
Shadow of church
Sweating crucifix
Vertigo forever
Time was alone and upset
Whiskey burns blurring memories
Fractured confidence disconnected
Brining on feelings of false contentment.

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yeah...drinking does not solve anything; just
    makes one numb giving them a false sense of
    happiness to forget all...good job on the ethree!

  • 8 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    No clue what an etheree is...maybe why I don't write like this......should probably look it up :) that aside, your poem was good....written as though you were stoned when you wrote it.....Id say drunk, but I have yet to find someone who's brilliant...or even simply thinking deep when in that state of mind haha

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Excellent work. I regret that I have already used my votes

  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Whiskey burns blurring memories
    Fractured confidence disconnected

    I could really relate to those two lines. I don't drink and don't plan on drinking because I've seen what it has done to my family and I don't want to be another nail in the coffin. I think this piece was very well written. I loved your diction. Nice work deary. -Nik

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I agree with Cindy, good job with the form. Drinking doesn't solve any problems, just creates more for a person.

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