Wanna Take You To Heaven...

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 9, 2011


I wanna take you to heaven...
far above the starry sky.
To encapsulate each other,
above the moonbeams riding high.
Wanna whisper softly to you,
words of love I've longed to say.
For it's you I've dreamt of day and night,
have waited for, to this day.

I wanna take you to heaven...
clasp your hand so dear in mine.
I've loved you for a lifetime,
and I will for all of time.
Wanna whisper softly to you,
as we ride the clouds up high.
This moment never to be forgot,
But remembered by you and I.

I wanna take you to heaven...
where we'ill share our love so sweet.
To place my lips upon you,
kiss your body so complete.
Wanna whisper softly to you,
and look into your eyes.
That tell me we have travelled far,
above the starry skies.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Lovely!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Another romantic and sweet write Olwin! Very
    nice..enjoyed the read!

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This was so sweet, I can't even say one thing against it. The feeling I got reading this was one of sheer delight. Love is wonderful and you penned it so well
    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I thought this was well written,

    I have just a few things I noticed, that need a little tweaking,

    In the first stanza, the last two lines didn’t feel right, as the word 'day' was used in both.
    I’d suggest you change them to read
    “For it is only you I have dreamt of throughout the night,
    Whom I have waited for up until this day”

    In the second stanza the flow was disrupted when you used lifetime, and then time at the end of the lines, just through me off a little,

    Other than these minor issues, a very sweet poem, showing love and passion,

    Keep writing because you have a talent.

    Love always,
    Tara-Kay

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