Welcome To The Hotel*

by Lemon   May 12, 2013


*Full title:
Welcome To The Hotel Of Broken Dreams, Shattered Hopes And Overwhelming Despair

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It's like sleeping in a hotel of broken dreams
Like a thousand troubled strangers have lain down in your bed
Each one clinging to their own shattered hope
Except the only stranger in your bed is you

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  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    This is great idea to close the sad feelings into a hotel! I would read forth... so it was great!

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    Amazing and flawless. This is short yet effective. It still carried the essence of aloofness.

    Keep writing:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was really different from a lot of poems I've read... I kind of like how it isn't so long, how it's only four lines yet speaks loudly and poetically about this loneliness. I like the thought of this, like you don't know who you are anymore and though there are so many people around you, you can only call yourself the real stranger. This read almost lyrically, I thought the first line would be a could song title or something!