Montgolfier (Concrete/Acrostic)

by - Mr. Darcy   Oct 20, 2015


Moving bubble like
( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( )
On a translucent wispy cloud.

Never has this Parisian landscape
X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X
Truly been this colourfully enhanced.

Gliding along the trailing River Seine

On a looking glass of dreams.
+ + + + + + + + + + + + + +
Levitation vacation over

France's lifeblood,

It's history

E v e r

Retold

Michael
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  • 4 months ago

    by Star

    This is really interesting!! It is something I would enjoy cooperating in my writings. I am adding this to my favorite list, I know I will be coming back for it. I need to do a little more research on this.

    Thank you sooo much for referring it to me :) It is too late to change my poem here, but I will play with it on my own!!

    PS. This is a really good poem, I am loving it !!

    • 4 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      I thought you might appreciate it. I'm sure your next shape poetry will work out.
      Take care.

  • 3 years ago

    by J Nair

    Michael, Your poetry along with its interesting pictography adding to the imagery also is a lesson in history.
    I had no clue about 'Montgolfier' but comments from Ingrid and Ben made me check this out on google and there was so much of information that you have geniusely incorporated into this Acrostic form of poetry..

    Michael its a WOW poem.
    Jay :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on this poetry form.
    Take care Cindy

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent Michael. Visions of floating happily along over the city of lights in a hot air balloon on a warm summer's evening - that's how I see it anyway!
    Needless to say how clever your structure is here - the brothers Montgolfier would be proud of this - wonderful!
    All the best
    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Really lovely how you displayed this on the screen, in the form or a hot air balloon, right?

    It takes us along on your flight in a very light hearted way.

    Well done, Michael!

    (((hugs))) xx

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