by Karan Mar 25, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Each night |
by Em
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This is a saddening, emotional piece. It feels a little eerie in my opinion because I imagine this person every night since their loss bleaching their eyes to mask the pain, mask the tears but in all honesty it makes the pain and tears worse and the redness too and I know you wouldn't bleach your eyes but as meena says it shows your pain in such a short, lovely write |
by Meena Krish
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With tears in my bleached eyes |
by Therapoetic4
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Like the form. Well employed. You've created a very strong central image here. Thanks for sharing. |