by CRAFTY KEN Apr 2, 2017
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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More about Clouds |
by Meena Krish
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This is something different, refreshing and vivid too! |
by CRAFTY KEN
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Thanks Meena! |
by Dark Secrets
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I love the imagery in this poem. It creates an effect of one of those "speed up nature" videos. I like the flow of events, how it's high spirited, brings you down and up again. |
by CRAFTY KEN
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Zahra, don't be sorry, I acually like the new style that you taught me. In School English was my Class and you are a great Teacher! By the way, my first Cousin Evelyn was an English Teacher in Canada and she published a Book about English but I don't know the details, maybe a Goggle search under her maiden name Tierney? Ken |
by DarkLight
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Wow! lovely interpretation of clouds nature. well put. That is quite a powerful poem. |
by CRAFTY KEN
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Thank you Darklight, Ben and Em, the Song; Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain was an inspiration to me in writing this poem. Also those Monday Holidays laying in bed with the sound of the rain outside was a delight! Our daughter in California always misses those beautiful billowing Clouds of Florida. |
by Ben Pickard
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Lovely, Ken. What an interesting and original write this is. As I read, I could almost imagine my own lips becoming parched and then, at the end, drenched in the wholesome goodness of heaven's springs! |
by Em
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Very rhymatic and refreshing |