A familiar melody

by Dagmar Wilson   Dec 2, 2017


Thinking of the past
lately it won't stop
I saw this girl wander around
she reminded me of me.
Only I could not recognize her face.

Long hair to her ankles
ribbons holding the weight,
feathery looking white blouse
bouncy long skirt.
Bangles up to her elbows
playing a familiar melody.

What really caught my attention
she wore no shoes.

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is really captivating Dagmar, and gives a glimpse of your free spirit through her. Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you and I am being called a hippie to this day

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is incredibly full of life and I love the voice here. I enjoy the fact that this was able to bring me a smile and break my heart all in one single motion. Great piece, beautifully penned, can't wait til monday to nominate this.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    dagmar this is profound yet beautifully heartbreaking

  • 8 years ago

    by Purple Raven

    I enjoyed reading this poem. Loved the imagery.

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