Caring Heart (acrostic poem)

by Robert Long   Dec 13, 2017


Caress me in your arms
arms filled with love by
reaching out your hand
in such a caring touch for
next to you i feel
gleeful so much

Holding you so close
enjoying your warmth
and with every touch
radiance and bliss of
true love

i threw this together its not much but tell me what you think

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  • 1 year ago

    by Ben

    I loved formed poetry...particularly acrostics and ABC poetry and thrown together or not this is a really nice acrostic from word use to sentiment it appears to say what you want it to which is the point of it all I guess :)

    If i had one criticism it would be to switch out the Capitals of each line to lower case unless grammatically it is correct to be in there - the reason for this is that sometimes it can be distracting to have an uppercase letter at the start of each line and because of this there is a very slight mental shift inside the readers mind mentally correcting it....try it out and see how it reads yourself....like I say just a minor criticism and not all that important in the grand scheme of things but you might prefer it that way :)

    Never the less this is a great write !

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Robert Long

      grammatically it can be to let the readers know the title of the poem because some do every other line as well. i tried it as well and i like it better. thank you Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    After my woeful attempt at an acrostic, I have a lot of respect for them - they're so much harder than they appear! This is really warm and lovely Robert ... good stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Long

    Thank you guys...it means a lot to me to hear that

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I have to agree with Craig well done

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I rather like this.

    Thrown together or otherwise I think it's rather well done.

    Regards

    Craig

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