Holidays are here

by deeplydesturbed   Dec 21, 2017


Happily laying my head to rest
On my pillow, only the best
Looking around the room all messed
I cant wait to unwind, no longer stressed
Dancing thoughts in my mind, im blessed
Already thinking of lazing around, undressed
Yes you will see all, including my chest
Suprisingly sober, yet full of zest

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  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Nams, you've depicted that joyous 'holiday' feeling so well here ... you sound light and free and it's making me a bit jealous! Lol. Enjoy! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...oh my...love this, Nams! Ah, it seems you are going to enjoy your holidays! Nicely stringed acrostic, a wonderful read.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Nams! That's quite cheeky, lol. While we are freezing out butts off you are shedding your clothes-enjoy your summer!

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Brenda!!! I have 2 weeks of no work!! Yay!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Goodness, Naomi, sounds like my kind of holiday, lol.
    Great, festive acrostic, but like Milly points out, not quite what us English are used to...

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very feisty lol :) fabulously rhymed too xx

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