by Michael Sep 18, 2018
category :
Life, society /
about society
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some times she would mumble |
by Brenda
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Michael, you certainly have a way with words and a story. Well done with this- |
by Michael
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Thank you Miss Brenda :)x |
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Love the Rhyming and great imagery as always. Captivating as always. Milly x |
by Michael
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Thank you Miss Milly :)x |
by Ya----Na
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Michael, fellow poets left such wonderful comments. Completely agree with Mel that part of the poem looks like a rap. |
by Michael
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Thank you Sg, spoiled with comments :) |
by mossgirl19
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Wow, I love this Michael. She seems to be a free spirited woman...but the long stanza was a rap part right...hehe. Almost can imagine Eminem. :-) |
by Michael
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Indeed Miss Mel, Thank you :)x |
by Michael
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Thanks everyone for your lovely comments. This lady is exceptional, a friend and very wise and intelligent, and she can rap haha! |