Till you conquer....

by Meena Krish   Feb 4, 2019



Do you know
the sadness which blows
behind the doors of our heart
as the white rain chills
all the aches until
courage stands in your crushed heart,

We will not falter
till you grow taller
and conquer what you have lost,
we will see you through
erase the deep blue
make you strong at any cost!

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  • 8 months ago

    by Zia Mikaela

    i feel so inspired by your poems! keep on writing! you are awesome!

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

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    Till you conquer by Meena Krish 10 points
    There seems to a couple of themes running through these poetic halls at present: self worth and parental responsibility. Meena writes of the latter here and does so stirringly well; this is like a call to arms for parents everywhere and really hits home. Simply done but marvellously effective.

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win. A haunting and captivating piece. Milly x

  • 10 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Meena, what a warm loving write, powerful, great words, the printed version of family love!

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Pain crushes until it finds a base to build up a tower of strength.

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