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by Michael Mar 26, 2020
Nature, environment /
I walked slowly across
your bed made of soft grains of sand,
arm in arm with the air
to where you greeted me.
like soft foamy lips rolled kisses
that curled between my toes and
along the top of my feet
your cheeks puffed-
blowing a delicate breeze
that held a texture of warmth;
-bringing a sigh of relief;
a sense of freedom from the
the sound of your voice carried
an orchestra of water, that
gently rushed through my ears
creating a twilight lullaby
I stood in awe.
rolled out a white carpet;
that shimmered across the surface
of the sea.
A silken path-
that led from the back of beyond right up, to where I was stood.
I looked up to where
the Milky way floated eloquently;
like a ship laden with a cargo;
carrying a host of star-studded galaxies
that drifted through a valley of misty clouds.
I stepped in,
a little deeper
your mood slightly changed
with an edge of roughness, almost
telling me, this was far enough.
I felt an air of trust;
a sense of respect.
I fell in love with
your natural charisma,
It made me realise, that what’s said of-
bringing me a feeling,
this can only be true
when one respects the other.( inspired by my recent visit to Australia
To see my son).
That's an amazing poem!
Thank you Hamda :)
by Biancas Veil
What a beautiful poem, the imagery is amazing, Frazer Island is an awesome place!
Thank you Biancas, I am glad you know of it. It certainly has a special place in my heart :)x
by Rania Moallem
You must have been inspired at the time! The imagery says it all, the wording is perfect and it's like a quick journey which you've take us on with your words!
Thank you Rania, lovely comments!, M x :)
by Meena Krish
Lovely descriptions beautifully penned, Congrats on the win!
Thank you Meena :)
Beautiful it is!
Thank you Mark :)
by Ben Pickard
by Poet on the Piano