by Star Nov 28, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
you |
by Skyfire
Really really lovely Star! |
by Star
Thank you ^_^ |
You know, I thought your last piece made me emotional, but this did even more. It's something I could find in a poetry book, flip to it, and just be overwhelmed with this feeling of being heard, of being anchored so to speak, of being comforted. Your word choice in this carries such compassion, care and meaning. That, as much as we may feel like we are drowning and we can't possibly survive this, a voice is reminding us to check our surroundings. Feel the ripples, acknowledge our breath, know that we are still capable of floating. Of fighting. |
by Star
Everyone's comments on this makes me emotional too, I didnt expect it to touch all of you. |
by Mr. Darcy
This did it: |
by Star
“happy” |
This is brilliant. It has a really powerful voice of its own,one of encouragement and care which I could instantly hear and feel. |
by Star
Thank you so much!!!! |
This poem is wonderful... The language, the phrases you've used, it's all just so delicate and beautiful. The way we tell everyone they're going to be okay, they'll recover, is so clear and powerful in this. I've read this at least six times now! Amazing :) |
by Star
Thank you Keira ^_^ |