Tattered Dreams

by Kat   Dec 3, 2020


White walls
Weak breathing
This is all your fault
Man seething.

Broken woman
Frail and small
Thin hands
She gave it her all.

Empty womb
Broken hearts
Dark lonely room
Miles apart.

Placing blame
Where it doesn’t belong
Feeling shame
And feeling alone.

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  • 2 months ago

    by Skyfire

    Ohhh Kat, so lonely. You are not alone in your grief for a future you do not have.

  • 2 months ago

    by Lainie Reay

    I like the hard hitting lines, shows the true sadness.

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, these are punchy lines which helps with the 'knockout' effect each one carries in content. A hard-hitting piece.

  • 2 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like punchy verse like this - each one a nugget, like a slow blink, each one revealing a new chapter.

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