by Poet on the Piano Nov 3, 2021
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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i shower in the gray silence of |
by Lost star
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Hi POTP, |
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I really appreciate it, Lost Star, thanks! |
by Xaque
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The writer described feelings by creating scenes in the external world and in their internal universe, using both to paint a picture of regrets and mistakes. I felt their pace and word choices brought the piece to life beautifully. |
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Thanks so much for reading, Xaque! |