Starlight

by Obscure   Dec 20, 2021


The stars blink sadly
And I blink back
We share a sorrow
That many lack

It is my own fault
I'm on my own
My mind invents things,
I can't find home

I don't need help yet
I never do
I'll do it myself
Try to get through

Don't want to burden
So I'll just wait
When I need help, it
Will be too late

Like starlight fading
Years after death
My cry for help comes
Well, you can guess

- © Obscure 2021

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  • 2 years ago

    by Walter

    Another great write from you - well done. Glad to see it nominated!

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Your poems resonate with me so much. I can't tell you enough how I love reading your poems and feeling understood in a way. The connection with the stars here was well done, simple in the moment shared, and the reality of how we can isolate ourselves. I have done this so often, especially recently, where it didn't even occur to me how much I actually needed help. I just kept thinking I could do it on my own, and as you mention, the weight of feeling like a burden or how we would be perceived can be overbearing. Thanks for sharing this.

    • 2 years ago

      by Obscure

      Thank you so much for your encouraging comment! I appreciate hearing that you enjoy my writing and knowing that it has helped you feel somewhat understood!

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