Emptiness

by PAUL HEWSON   Sep 8, 2004


I try to write the way i feel
but just this crap pours out of me
it misses the point
doesn't even come close
i want to explode my thought on to this paper
but i don't even know what they are .
i know that they burn inside me
make me wanna sleep all day
make me nervous and sick
i don't want to hurt myself
but i do so everyday
i want to feel freedom
but i have no idea what makes me feel so constrained
i want to love the ones that love me
but they cant even get close
I'm sure i used to like the sound of the rain
or sitting in the shade of Summers day
i just don't know how i feel these day
but i think i need help

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  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Another brilliant read ,so far your writing as amazed me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    you have taken the first step to recovery keep writting ang keep walking

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..i loved this poem..I wrote something similar once..I know exactly what that feels like..that poem totally felt like me..wow great job!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by _the_punk_kid_

    hellooo, cool piece, i thought these lines were really good, 'i want to explode my thought on to this paper
    but i don't even know what they are' but you've managed to get some of the feelings out without realising it... i hope writing it made you feel better too, i thought it was rad well done!:)beanxx oh and i dont kno whats up with the low ratings,ppl are odd but you got a 5 from mee:D

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