That stanger i once was

by confusion   Nov 11, 2004


*wrote this earlier in school when i suddenly felt alone. please comment, does it seem unfinished?*

sat in a room
filled with people i know
people i knew
from where i used to go

so much has changed
since jade left
to the other side of the world
only memories kept

who i used to be
seems a stranger now
changed myself and all around
but not quite sure how

people now asking questions
why am i suddenly sad?
what is on my mind?
what has made me mad?

but all of these questions
are just adding to the mess
of this confusion so dense
feelings now numb, emotionless

they're all staring now
all surrounding me
i cant answer these question
not even to me

i no longer understand
how my mind choses to work
all i know is everyday
just brings more pain and hurt

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  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    no it dosent lu its gd. gd work for a dt lesson lol