Take my mind

by confusion   Nov 14, 2004


Take my world
take my mind
place them where
i won't find

steal my soul
steal my heart
even though
it broke apart

take them far
take them wide
overs seas
let them hide

so i cant
feel the pain
so i wont
cut again

so let me go
leave me here
without the pain
full of fear

don't you notice
blind to your eye
of these tears
that i cry

i wish you
could only see
what i want
inside of me

but your ego
is too strong
to let me keep
holding on

and your heart
too numb to feel
all these feelings
that are real

so you pretend
to yourself
as you don't fool
anyone else

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  • 19 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Very good! Great job! I like the style of this poem! I would be interested in seeing writing by you that isn't sad, that could be a challenge! But great writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    omGG....dat was so great well done Mwazii XOxox Stephy :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Polly

    i really liked it, well done. you managed to write feelings, which i often find kinda hard. so well done

  • 19 years ago

    by lanie luvs u x3

    great poem. thank you so much for your comment on my poem. keep writing your really good. love ya.

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thats reall good but i think u mean steal don't you? anyways another 11/10 poem keep it up.

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