My Final Plea

by Shana   Nov 15, 2004


I hear many voices
They tell me what to do
I have made terrible choices
You can't possibly have a clue, what I've been through

There are demons inside of me
I cannot get them out
They are demons, that I can only see
The pain is so real, All I can do is scream and shout

I feel like an ant
I always get stepped on
I don't mean to rant
But I want these demons to be gone

Everyone says they are my friend
They don't really like me
They just pretend
This is my final plea

With this gun
I will die, never to receive my first kiss
I am the one
No one will miss

When I pull the trigger it will be too late
I am sorry, family
But this is my fate
You will see

When you get this note
Please don't cry
This I quote
"For I am meant to die"

This is a dedication for someone I... used to know, he shot himself in the head because he thought no one cared... Please tell me what you think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    It is very deep but very good! Keep it up :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    I liked it, but the rhyming sounded a little forced sometimes, but other than that it was an awesome poem.....I'm sorry someone you know killed himself, that is terrible.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Thats a really great poem i really like it alot...but ur a little heavy on the literal rhyming....cool it a lil...maybe every few lines or something. but i can really imagine the story behind it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I liked it. It was well written. The only thing I would change about it is that the flow is a bit awkward at the end of the first line and some other ones too, so if you would change it a bit then it might be better. But over all a very good poem, keep on writing.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by Chad Reamer

    This was really good 5/5