Oh hun that sent shivers down my spine! I nearly cried! He will be watching over you and everything will be alright. My friend had a little girl and she died. It was heartbreaking but she's got the comfort of knowing that she'll be alright. She has photo's to look back on. Hope you are ok and thanks for the comments :)
Very touching and totally beautiful. hmm, maybe work on the flow. The number of words you had in each line varied a bit too much so the flow got a bit messed up. Try working on that. Otherwise good poem, keep writing.
16 years ago
by Jason Meres
I don't even feel as though I have the right to comment. Truly, that was beautiful.