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by Rachel E F Allen Apr 16, 2005
Sadness, depression /
Open your eyes now my darling
Let me kiss them until you awake
I will sing you a lullaby
Cherish every movement you make
Open your eyes now my angel
Let me see that they are blue
I will show you everything I adore in this world
But not love anything more than you
Open your eyes now little precious
Let me show you the blue of the sky
I promise I will never let you go
But please take away these tears that I cry
Open your eyes now my sweetheart
Let me keep you safe and warm for all time
Mummy needs your help though to carry on
Please just give me hope, a sign
Open your eyes now sweet boy
Let me rock you in my arms
I will promise to always
Keep you safe from harm
Open your eyes now my dead child
Please open your eyes, open your eyes
What have I done to deserve this?
Why canâ€™t God hear my cries?
Open your eyes now and see me
Everyone else get away
He is my baby and I need to hold him
In my arms he shall stay
I need to open my eyes now and see you
Feel that your warmth has all gone
Know that never will I see my face in yours
Answer me God what have I ever done?
Opened my eyes now no hope left
I kiss you heavy hearted and sigh
Sleep tight now safe and sound
I love you angel, goodbye.
by silent submission
this poem is amazing its so well written i cried! thankyou for commenting on my work i really apreciate it, your a greta writer obviously so keep on truckin....
Awe, that was really sad, beautifully written, great job keep it up!
Aww this poem is so sad. Very well written though. Hope your ok. >3jess
by Michael D Nalley
beautiful poem with an excellent flow
*clap*clap*clap* Really wonderful poem..two thumbs up!..
I Honestly like it..And I just want you to know you're one of my favorites..
All the best to You!..