Your last breath

by ReBecca   Dec 18, 2004


Your Last Breath

Daughter you died,
nine years ago today.
I wanted you to be here,
but God wanted you to stay.

I surrendered to his choice,
but not without a lot of crying.
I was so angry,
and felt like I was dying.

I didn’t want you to go.
I wanted you with me.
Yet I walked into your room,
with arms so bare and empty.

Nothing in life prepared me,
for you going away.
I live a little bit…
and still die every day.

I never get to see your face,
or your smile so bright.
I cant sing you songs,
on a cold, winters night.

I know you must be in heaven,
because only angels are.
I want to touch your face,
but you are so far.

You’re in my thoughts
on this birthday night.
Out of reach…
but never out of sight.

written by:
ReBecca Sanchez

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Another very sad poem, I am so sorry for your loss, I cant imagine the pain of losing any of my children. The first got my eyes a little teary but this one actually made me cry. Another beautiful poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Wow all your poems are so emotional
    your are a wonderful poet
    i am adding you to my favorites

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Another awsome poem, and the poem i have called vokda and duckies has been copied by a ton of ppl which is why I stated that I added to it I'll edit it and make it more clear since 95% of it is my words

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I'm sad for you, but I'm glad to see you're using your gift to touch peoples hearts.

    This is one of my fave parts:
    "Nothing in life prepared me,
    for you going away.
    I live a little bit…
    and still die every day."

    Powerful words. Beautiful poem.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by tasha

    that really made me cry thank you so much for writing your comment on my poem "my abortion but your problem too" im so sorry about losing your daughter i have a son who is three and i have to be honest i dont think my pain would compare with yours as although i think about him or her i never really knew her if you ever want to talk im here and a really great poem love always tasha x

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