Let me in

by happy days   Jan 31, 2005


I hate to see you so unhappy
Wishing you could die
I wish I could protect you
Save you from your pain
Each day you dread the bell
That allows us to go home
Fearing what might happen
Once you’re through the door
I wish you could trust me
When I say it’ll be okay
we’ll pull through together
Just you wait and see
Your texts are always sad
And speak of your despair
Yet to others you appear so
Strong, kind and happy
Let me hold you in my arms
To ease the pain away
Never listen to what they say
It’s a load of hurtful lies
I really want to help you
If only you’d let me in
I know it’s really hard for you
So let me share the pain

*please vote and comment, my best friend is having trouble at home and i want to let her know how much i care thanks *

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I loved it! once again another good job! I wish I had ur talent! Keep it up ur great at this!

  • Aww thats so sweet of you to think of your friend like that! This was a very good poem, I liked it. Keep it up!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    its nice to know how much someone can care. great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    yeah, it would be better if it rhymed but for a non rhyming poem, you did a great job expressing feelings...i know how it feels...an everyday thing for me too...be strong for ur friend!! God bless

    Love Heather.