214(Feb. 14 2005)

by Jomar Bautista   Feb 9, 2005


Days passes by so fast
And now it was February 14, 2005
The day that everyone has waited
The day that nobody will forget
The day that every wish will come true

But for me,
It is different
It's just an ordinary day
For the one that I have love
Is the one that is already
taken away

It's so hard to find the words
And just to make them hide
Where all I ever wanted to say
Is that "Would you be my valentine?"

But I know,
It will never happen
Not even a single chance
Because you are already taken
And the one I could never have

I am so lonely
I am lost
I was all alone
I don't even have a place to go

Is this God's punishment?
For loving you so much
That is not meant
If so, then just take my life
And be gone with all the pain
I take inside...

This is my valentine I hope everyone knows. Thanks 4 reading and I hope you enjoy. Plz vote, comment or suggest that will make my work a lot better.Thanks!!! =)

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  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    hey, it's good. sad but good. keep it up. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I felt like u this year! Well done! Please check out some of mine and give me ur thoughts! Thanx

  • I love this poem, its so emotional. I think many can realate. Keep it up!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Valerie

    You found a good way to speak the truth about how lots of people feel. Great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    *hugs you* this is a great poem...i feel the same way...~sherrie~