Love's Treacherous Grave

by HOLLY ARMER   Feb 23, 2005


Take me and break me
rip me apart.
Torment and beat me
breaking my heart.

Watch with a smile
as my pieces now fall.
Too broken to cry
unable to crawl.

Laugh with vengeance
at my horrified screams.
Hit me again...
shatter my dreams.

I need it, I want it
your anger and rage.
It's my only chance
to break out of this cage.

You've kept me here,
I can't take anymore.
I won't be your prisoner,
I'm no longer your w*ore!

Just give it to me
the hate that I crave.
So my soul can rest peacefully
in this treacherous grave.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Joann

    wow...im speachless...i liked it alot though...good job...5/5 ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    excellent!
    your words really flow so well in all of your poems
    i can relate a bit too, i really loved it
    keep up the wonderful work, you have a real talent!

    ~*LorienElf*~

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow, that was really great! This is my favorite stanza...

    Take me and break me
    rip me apart.
    Torment and beat me
    breaking my heart

    It's very powerful. Thank you soooo much for the comments on my poems! They mean so much! :)

    Great poem hun, keep it up!

    Love always,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    damn girl! Glad to see you back w/ even better poetry-5 all the way

    love ya and BIG HUGS
    -Heather M Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! excellent poem!!

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