Time to say goodbye

by BleedingAngel   Mar 8, 2005


Sorry for saying goodbye like this but I no longer want to live
People always told me that I was pretty and had so much to give
But I hate my body and my freaking mind
I have nothing in life to leave behind
Voices in my head telling me what to do and what to mean
I can't imagine how it must have seen
Now I'm ready to die so I pick up the knife
I put it to my wrist and waiting for God to take my life
There is so much blood running down the floor
I'm dying and no one will walk in the door
Why won't you safe me, your little girl
why don't you love me, when you brought me in to this world
When you read this I will be dead
I'll be free from the voices in my head
Sorry but I can't take the meaningless life anymore
so here I am, dying in the bathroom floor
I put the knife safely down, you know I love you
I just hoped that you would love me too

Copyright 2005 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    The poem was ok these changes might make it better.
    line 2 (i'm pretty) not I was, (have) not had had.
    line 6 (seem) not seen.
    line 8 you need an (I'm) waiting.
    line 12 needs wouldn't
    line 16 needs on
    Other than my sugestons Witch my or may not work. the poem had great feeling.

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    Your a great writer, if you ever want someone to talk to, my email and screen name are on my page. much love, johnny

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Very good poem, well done, I really liked the flow of this one, stick around even if its just so a sadarse like me has someone to chat too much love katie! xxxx 5/5 xxxx

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