The Weather's Fine

by Tara   Mar 15, 2005


No one's died
I'm not in pain
The weather's fine
No signs on rain.
I have no reason
Nothing to say
To justify why
It feels this way.
Can't put into words
What goes through my mind
Can't figure out why
Life's left me behind.
It feels like the world
Dropped me off in the cold -
Trembling and shaken
With no fate to hold.
Alive on the outside
They think I'm okay,
It builds up inside me
Then washes away.
The weather's fine
But tears leave a stain
And in my mind
Down pours the rain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, just wow, all I can say is, a lot of people can relate to this. Excellent write, I liked the way it flowed and the emotion that lied within. Amazing write. Although short, it was to the point, good job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Incredbile flow. Awesome word use and i just LOVE love love the flow. You are an incredible writer!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy

    heavely...you are so talented, never give up

  • 19 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    Wow