Closed Eyes

by Tara   Aug 15, 2003


A black room sits in silence
The walls, so cold, so bare
Alone, I sit on hardened ground,
Alone, I sit and stare.

A life so dim and pointless
Don’t need a second glance
It’s all the same, its all downhill
Redemption, not a chance.

And I can’t see a single thing
My eyes are shut so tight
No worries, though, its better dark
Than blinded by the light.

Won’t let another soul in sight
There’s no need for a door
Its safe this way, its better alone
Than hurting even more.

So in this room, I’ll live my life
Blind hope, it only dies
No added pain when you’re alone
And living with closed eyes

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

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    by Randy Lee

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