Loving You

by Tara   Aug 15, 2003


These feelings, words can not express,
But on this paper, I?ll do my best.
A thousand stars in the sky at night -
Could not express these feelings right.
Oceans stretching shore to shore -
Endless, but I love you more.
I never knew I could feel this much,
My heart?s content with just your touch.
No matter where we have to go,
There?s one thing that I?ll always know.
I love you deeply, I love you true,
I?ll spend my whole life loving you.

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  • 13 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I dont even know how to start explaing.. my fav lines are...

    Oceans stretching shore to shore -
    Endless, but I love you more

    such a short poem, but very emtional. love it

  • 13 years ago

    by Chained4ever

    I love how you make your poems flow and how you put so much life in them.

    ~~~~~~~~~Chained4ever~~~~~~~

  • 13 years ago

    by Bombchelle88

    All those votes and such few comments. This is the best poem I've read in a very long time. So simply worded, but the feeling definitely comes through.

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah such a gr8 work. in very short words you have explainded the beauty of love i loved you this poem. and i am sure this poem is the best poem for that i was searching from a while. finaly i have searched this poem. your work is gr8 but the talent you shows is the best. i loved your poem"

    may you live long
    your all pom was good

    i liked these lines allot
    I love you deeply, I love you true,
    IÂ’ll spend my whole life loving you.

  • 15 years ago

    by JLT

    Woah... It's beautiful.. I love how you explained EVERYTHING in such a short poem lol. It's the best short poem i've ever read lol. Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

    ~Jessica