Broken Friendship

by ---AL---   Apr 13, 2005


Broken Friendship

A tear is shed for broken hearts,
As Faithful friends, do depart,
A wasted bond which has been spun,
Weakened, battered and undone,
And always vengeance in the way,
But still their tears drop, day by day,
Wishing things could mend and heal,
But anger is all they wish to feel,
Scared to admit that they may long,
To one day, fix the things gone wrong.
But till the day of mended pain,
Both shall struggle to maintain,
Their ignorance to their mistakes,
Their empty care that friends did break,
No one knows, what future holds,
But two true friends do unfold,
It came so quick, without demand,
But as for now, it’s in their hands,
For neither knows what other feels,
But both must know what all is real,
The memories of the endless times,
The pain that seems in constant rhyme,
The mending power which they confer,
The reality of longing for,
And now lies the day which needs an end,
To leave it stay as broken friends,
Or to work for things that they do long,
But either way, they should move on.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    oh very good, like u r watching from afar...
    i liked it, can't exactly realate, my girlfriends and i dont' really fight, but my of my best friendships w/ guys have tragic endings, my friendship wasn't good enough for them, they always pushed for more.
    still though, awesome poem,
    doesn't hold back any emotions,
    that would be ur bluntness, lol
    love u, miss u,
    never stop writing, i luv reading it
    hugs and kisses
    *rach*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This was a great write...Nice rhyme, though Hold and Hand don't really rhyme...Nicely done, I'm sure that many can relate!

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Excellent. Very nice flow, word choice, and message. Very well done.
    ~Faith of the Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Beautifull written. I loved the way it flowed and the message was divine. Broken friendship can be painful though. Excellent write my friend. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    NICE!!! it hit me right in the heart.

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