My Conscience Said No

by Dark Savior   Apr 30, 2005


My defenses said no, stay away.
but i followed all the way.
hoping i would find true love that day.

Dark is my conscience my better half .
he is the one who said not to save cash.
that it was just a facade it wouldn't last.

Dark always gets things right, never wrong.
He is out to play, it's where he should belong.
I thought it was true when i first heard "our song"

I thought it was different, that we were forever.
i asked my conscience his opinion and he knew better.
i listened to him and tell me that pain i would endeavor.

He is always so right and i hate it about him.
He said it would happen even last part.
how if she mended it then she would break my heart.

I wish i could say this has a happy ending.
This is one story that is still in-pending.
Dark was there to wipe my tear, pull my away from beers.

Dark was there to tell me what to do.
Dark was there stuck to me like glue.
Somehow ...i had known it too.

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 14 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    This really makes me think of my last relationship or whatever me and him are now. Actually, I think about all my relationships with family and friends too. Theres a voice in my head that tells me a million times what I'm getting myself into. But sometimes, even though we know it wont work out we want to at least try. Sometimes the consequences are not exactly clear at the time. How are we supposed to know in the first place right?

    Then there are sometimes that we listen to the voice too much and we skipped out on a good chance . With whatever happens with any decision we make, it only helps make our person.

    Thank you for the write. I enjoy your poetry and thanx for commenting mine.

  • 15 years ago

    by SuperGalacticLoveChild

    Wow this poem is Wow. it's something millions can relate to, and Maybe even put a lot of thought into actualy listening to themselves once in a while. Great wrk!

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow this is excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Creative...I think you did a great job....

    "Dark was there to wipe my tear, pull my away from beers."

    ^ I believe it should say "...pull me away from beers."

    If Dark really is your better half, then I guess I'm glad he's there to help you...

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    I believe that this place wasnt made to talk about personal things,i read the poem ,created my own picture and when i came to comment i was completly distracted didnt know what was goin on !

    honestly i don't know what to say.
    i will come back to read it again sometime later.

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

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