You Told Me

by Richard   May 6, 2005


Yesterday i woke up.
My eyes were so sore.
It hurt to try and see.
The mirror showed me a shadow
A truth i didn't see before.
Until you showed me.

You said you loved me,
but you couldn't hold me.
You said you cared for me,
but couldn't touch me.
You said you'd see me,
but couldn't have me.
I want you so bad
but you said I'm not the one.

She's so special look what I've done
I've written and said
all that i can. I have cried
all that i can.
Now my eyes are open
forever they will burn
these tears of sadness
I cannot stop

Please don't tell me,
that it's never meant to be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, well written. Very emotional poem. I loved it.

    ~Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Aww...thats so good and sad.. i love it..take care hun 5/5

    thanks for sharing
    shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Very heart wrenching some real good spots but need abit of reviing almost there...

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    Good job! Post more and I will definitely read em!