Waited Forever

by Richard   May 8, 2005


You never told me before
that you loved me
until I asked you
if you wanted me
you said you've always cared
but there was a problem
and you were broken

I said that I’d wait until the day
were you'd be fixed
and you knew who you were
I don’t have an immortal life
I haven’t done anything heroic
and soon my name will be forgotten
but my spirit will live on
loving everything about you

People are always trying to break us up
even if we were not together
they'd say anything to take what's ours
they'd do anything to go wild
I’d see that ugly smirk on their face
somewhat proud of what they'd made
a life of lonely sick and vile
full of laughter and all
pointless

I sometimes get confused
around every corner
there’s an anti cupid
another girl trying to have me
she tells you things , very mean
Trying honestly to point out
what a lie, and fake image
that she believes. Confusing and angering
you

For our love to be strong and spunky
you have to beat all obstacles
and ignore all that’s bumpy
know that ill always be there for you
lying next to you’re death bed
holding hands, our passions been fed
at the same time
A tear falls down both are cheeks
you whisper to me
ill see you soon
ill smile knowing that I waited

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I agree that it seemed rushed. You have some beautiful word choices but you just need to slow it down even it makes the poem longer. The words should be addicting enough to keep their attention.

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Aww thats so cute.. i love it
    5/5

    take care
    thanks for sharing
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    aww... :*(... aww.... thats so cute.. don't stop writing you wil go far..
    love ya!
    marlene

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    this was ok but what were you really waiting foir her death you kinda went from school to growing old in a matter of a few lines and you seemed to skip alot of things. It just did not work for me sorry...

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    this was ok but what were you really waiting foir her death you kinda went from school to growing old in a matter of a few lines and you seemed to skip alot of things. It just did not work for me sorry...