Ab/Ex uno disce omnes

by Dark Savior   May 9, 2005


A Man sat alone, sitting as always
his soul was dark as the night outside

what was kept inside hurt him deeply
for his parents knew of what was seeping

he was the seed of evil all of destruction
he was silent as a kid, that's what we call corruption

when you look at him you see a normal man
but you didn't know he killed a girl last eve.

she kicked and she had screamed.
she cried and ask for her mom

he laughed and then slices her head off
he was silent as it was require by his work

he was tired of never speaking so it began to leek
deep inside his brain there began to arouse something.

he had seen it a thousand times, never seen it done.
so the next one would be done by him, by his hand.

So he took a knife and began to slice the little girl
she screamed and cried for a little while as his knife sered her flesh.

he had loved ever moment of it, enjoying it too much.
His eyes glee as though he were the demon....

He bathed in her blood and girlishly giggled
This was his dream and no one can stop him.

So the Next day he got up and dumped the body off.
he still had a smirk as he let it roll from his whee barrel

He washed his hands and walked to work.
as he began to walk in he shook a clients hands.

Never know that he was an Undertaker
And their little girl had fallen also at his hands.

---it sucks i know but i am just writing down what i want at the moment. i feel darkness so i write it.vote if you like comment also if you wish.

© 2005 Shaun M.K

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very sad poem, it just shows how some people can be really messed up. This is a good poem you might read through it again and make sure that the words are in the tense. Other then that I see nothing wrong with this poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    You know what I didn't like about it? (*shocked face at dislikement*) Twas the fact that I was not able to look away or make noise to not hear it (if it were on screen or something)...yeah, that part...the lala's in my head didn't do a thing...anyways....

    "she kicked and she had screamed.
    she cried and ask for her mom" - *asked

    ^In my head, I automatically read "mommy" at the end of the line...it may go better with that...not sure though...may not seem realistic, but in terror who knows what she'd cry out....

    "he laughed and then slices her head off
    he was silent as it was require by his work" -
    *required

    "he still had a smirk as he let it roll from his whee barrel" - *wheel

    You're not allowed to say it sucks :P Don't judge your own work...you write what you feel, that's all you need to do.

    *attempts to shine light on you*

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by UM

    This really wasn't that bad...You just need to refine it some(check spelling, capitalization, word choice etc) and it would be pretty good. It was kinda dark and sadistic and I kinda liked it. Sounds kinda Stephen Kingish or Edgar Allan Poe-ish. Good Job.
    Bryant

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    You meant, fallen in the last line in which I liked the last couplet but as you said, the poem's just basically a vent....but not too bad. 4/5

    Love,
    Heather.

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