by Robert May 26, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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by noha
Waw its nice way how you tell us the story and powerfull words each line is interest me,well done 5/5 |
I liked this poems nice job 5/5 |
by Michelle18
I really like this poem...its unique.. |
A very nicely written piece. You portrayed the emotions so well and I like the structure you used. The beginning really drew in my attention. And you ended it so perfectly. Definitely, a well deserved 5/5. |
I love the way tat you use this poem in first person pronoun which makes it more personal, nicexx alex xxx |