A thousand broken promises.

by Steven Beesley   Jun 24, 2005


A thousand broken promises from a thousand broken days.

A thousand tiny splinters from a thousand broken dreams.

A thousand fragmented wishes from a thousand failed prayers.

And a thousand glass pieces that ruptured this tiny heart.

A million tomorrows will continue to keep us apart.

A million tomorrows will not heal this love lorn poet's heart.

I would die ten million times over for one more look into your sweet face.

I would love you till infinity should you come back to my embrace.

I'm am like a poor angel that has fallen from grace. All I beg is your understanding, your love, support and faith.

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  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    WOW great poem loved it keep up the great wrk :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Aww this is cute, i really like it, it reads really well,
    Thanks for commenting on my poems, again, i really appreciate it...
    <3 charli xxx ~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    Oh, very nice...But
    "And a thousand glass pieces the ruptured this tiny heart."
    I beleive you mean "that rupture this tiny heart"
    I really liked the last stanza, very effective ending. Keep up the good work Beesley
    ~*Freak*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Excellent poem Steven. I really enjoyed it.
    "I would die ten million times over for one more look into your sweet face."

    Beautiful line. I loved it. Thanks for the comments on my poetry. It really means alot:)

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Steve,

    This poem was grt.

    I would die ten million times over for one more look into your sweet face.

    That part of the poem really got to me. I can tell that it came from the heart. I loved this poem. Once again another wonderful poem.

    And thanx for ur comments.

    Nana

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