Two lost chances

by allison   Jul 16, 2005


There once was this girl, Who would do everything in her power
To get this one guy to notice her, Maybe even give her a flower

Days turned to weeks, and as hard as she tried
She just couldn't get off this long hard ride

He saw her everyday, wondered why he’d never have her
He knew they should be together, they were

This special guy worried that he’d lose her, never get the chance
How he wished the rain would come, and then they could dance

Mutual friends, would invite them to the same places
Both of them would avoid, stare at thier laces.

Everyone saw it, how well it would work
When anyone told them, they’d both just smirk

People came, all intrested in having them as their own
They just smiled and said, No Thanks then I have someone in a lower tone

Now we are here, they still hide thier feelings
Wake up and miss each other every mornings

I hope that if they finally get together
They will stay together, through all weather

My best advice, that I can lend
Is show your feelings, it’ll work out in the end

**Hey
Well i wrote this one about two of my good friends.. Please comment thanks**

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Fantastic poem, hun... I love this... I hope that your two friends read this. Great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Thank you for the comment on my poems and you write very well also i added you to my fav.

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Excellent poem, I thought it was very well written, my girlfriend and I liked each other for almost a year before we started going out. It drove us both insane. Take care, and thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    you had a constant ryrme or flow until the last line...? what happened?