She was...She became

by Torn   Aug 23, 2005


She was beautiful,
Her gorgeous eyes,
Her radiant smile,
Her toned figure.
She became ugly,
Her tear-stricken eyes,
Her depressing frown,
Her abused body.

She was beautiful,
Her optimism,
Her sense of humor,
Her outlook on life.
She became ugly,
Her pessimism,
Her lack of laughs,
Her wish to suicide.

She was beautiful,
Her love for friends,
Her caring beyond words,
Her bestest best friends.
She became ugly,
Her unsocial behavior,
Trying not to care,
Losing all her best friends.

She was beautiful,
But she fell to darkness.
She became ugly,
Because no-one caught her.
She was beautiful,
But no-one told her so.
She's ugly now you know,
Too low to pick her up.
Can't face herself,
Doesn't see how others can.

*bit weird, but it just kinda flowed.
Please comment, it means so much to me*

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Omg wow hun, this is deep, wow I've never read anything like this, very expressive and unique, you're some writer wow, we've got our future shakespear here hun, great work i cant wait to reaaad moree woot woot

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Hmm... who's this about?? can i guess??
    hmm love ya, xoxoxo