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by Torn Jun 3, 2006
Dark, fantasy /
In a world of twisted lies and fate,
Where your words and fists,
Make my body ache.
I'm finally ripping at the seams,
I can't hold this in any longer,
Faded, are my hopes and dreams.
My anger off the scale,
I burn with acid hate,
My head ready to implode,
This pressure I can't take.
Too many thoughts,
Making my body wrought,
Nerves tense and muscles raw.
Too many fatalistic ideas,
To rip your body apart,
Show you the pain that I feel in my heart.
Sounds sick doesn't it?
The things that will make you go mad.
Play with your head and thoughts,
Till they leave you broken and sad.
I can't help it anymore,
You've left me all alone,
Keep walking, burden is gone.
This is so increadibly visual and touching. Unbelievable... In it's own way - it's beautiful in it's honesty.
by Sarah Ann
Aww wow you written this poem so beautifully, and the ending was even stunning. I loved this, extremely well written and powerful. I really hope everything is well, try to look at the better side of things and keep up your good work! 5/5(Thank you for your comment on my poem! xxx)
I like the first two stanzas the besttt...this is so good...you've gotten so good!!! lost the rhyme scheme but it was so good it didnt even matter lol this is amazing i really mean that 5/5
Amazing just like all of your others. I loved how I could relate so easily to every line. I hope you get everything worked out. Take care.
*> : PainOfOne [blaine]
Amazing. Love it.