Friday, 26th August, 2005

by Torn   Aug 23, 2005


I dream it perfectly,
The day of this happiness.
I will be free this time,
To find a better place.
I'll take those white pills,
And cut to my heart's content.
I'll lay there immobile,
With a smile upon my face.
I didn't kill myself,
Because i was already dead.
Just a small favor,
For myself and you: 'my friend'.
You'll pretend you care,
And maybe you're in shock.
Don't pretend, don't lie again.
I wish i had a goodbye,
Those I love You and Stay Strong's,
But i don't, and maybe its best.
This way there's nothing,
And this is my last breath.

*please comment, it means a hell of a lot. This is basically how I'm feeling at the moment. Every thing's going bad...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    It is a great poem and i am sorry that you felt that way i wish i could be of more help but i cants this is how i can help by lettign u know that there are people out there for you and we are even though you dont know us. but givving you coments and telling you we care helps i know it dose!! so keep your head high and wear a smile knowing that some one dose care and you beath sucide. and also know that the pain will end i promice. just gove it time
    ~ Dustin

  • 18 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Give you a 5. Simple but very deep. I love your style and poems. They really hit home in the emotional area. I know these feelings all to well. Keeping going and writing, that's one of the ways to let yourself fly.

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    Awwww babe, thats how i was feeling in august and september...... i know its kinda late....but youre worth it.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Great poem dear..sometimes i think that i should rather start giving u 5/5 w/o even reading ur poems...u r simply amazing....take care

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, omgzz this is so sadd, Your work is a piece of art really hun, you've expressed yourself amazingly in this poem wow, my jaw dropped reading it its so amazing, ah wow, amazinggg hun

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