Carving Pain

by Torn   Sep 16, 2005


Cutting all night,
I couldn't stop
Was waiting for a sign,
That dozens was enough.
But each time I stopped,
I only craved more.
More sign that I was alive,
Proof that I hated myself.
It's then i think i realised
That deep was never enough.
So deeper yet I went,
And more blood came out.
Finally at last,
My cravings were cured.
And this pain still remains.
But will it ever go away?
Now more scars to hide.
Guilt I try to bare.
My only relief is from you,
I'm so sorry you've been used,
Through and through.
I promise there'll be an end,
You'll be of no use i'm sure,
To a dead girl lying on the floor.

*please comment*
I'll return the favour

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  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Noo hunni..you have to stay strong..PM me or something i wnat to help you...really your soo talented and i know you will have a great future just ahng on there like i am...great poem

    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Maree

    Yet another amazingly written poem. You have such a talent for writing down your thoughts and feelings. I understand how you feel completely, it's so weird. And keep up the great work...I put you one my favourites list :P...and thanks for all your comments, it means a lot. Take Care. Luv Nicole =)

  • 18 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    Hey, great poem, i really liked it. you have a lot of talent. thanks for commenting on mine.

    >> Tear Stained Face

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    The words and structure is beautiful. Nice piece.

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