Everything You Said

by Torn   Sep 20, 2005


You say i have no reason to frown,
I snigger because maybe you're right.
Maybe i should be happy,
I should change just like that.

You say i don't try hard enough,
I look down with disappointment.
I try so hard it hurts,
When it goes wrong and i fail.

You say I'm a pathetic person,
I cry with the realization.
Nothing i ever do is right,
Everything can ever be enough.

You say I'm too ugly to look at,
I fall with these burdened shoulders.
My self-esteem crumbles more,
I'm left to change the impossible.

You say you're ashamed to call me yours,
I can't move with self-hatred.
No longer good enough for anything,
Not even your dutied love.

You all say you want out,
I'm not going to bother putting up a fight.
It's better to let go of people who don't care,
Than to leave when there was a chance.

A chance to be happy,
To make things right,
A chance to hold on,
And put up a fight.

That chance is gone now,
Faded with my self-hatred,
And now has vanished,
With everything you said.

*To Dad*

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun, once again I feel like i am the girl in poem wow, it is so beautiful, I dont know what to say, you have a very unique talent & your writing is absolutely fantastic, great work keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I love that

    its soo good
    it reminds me of my dad !!

    GREAT JOB AND POEM!!

    id say 5/5 !!

  • 18 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! that made me cry!! ur too much of a great person to be treated like that!! its a really good poem and like ive said before u have so much talkent so dont EVER stop writting because ur poems r SOOOO gooD!! plz keep it up and im here 2 talk 5/5 all the way

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Maree

    Aww that was such a sad but touching poem. No one should ever be treated like that. Keep up the great work. And thanks for the comment on my poem and your welcome for the comment on you rother poem...I make sure I always return a comment. Take Care and Stay Strong. Luv Nicole =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    M sorry this is abt ur dad.. i kno its hard .. so just try to go on wid ur life.. thats the way life is.. read my new poem .. its abt mye x

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