Here beside me

by Goth   Sep 21, 2005


The world
You are to me,
Lost without you
I would be,
I love you
With all I am,
And trust me
Ill do all I can.
To keep you with me
Is what I need,
Needing you to stay
Here beside me,
Beside me,
Youll be,
And thats why
Its you
I will always keep!

* I tried something different with this one*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very well done. I like the way you put this together. Have you tried reading from bottom to top? Sounds pretty awesome also. Excellent job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Great work. Really liked the flow and emotion put into it.

  • 14 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    I liked this one is simple and nice
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl well i reallie liked this peom especailly the begining i just think you kinda lost the nice flow in the end but nice job! loved it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Atomic

    Nice, it's good to want to do something new once a while like that. =)

    It sounds like it's a part of a very lovely song.

    My favourite lines are:

    "I love you
    With all I am,
    And trust me
    Ill do all I can."

    Though I think it's foolish act, but it's still nice.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!