Bye...

by nikki   Sep 22, 2005


You were my friend,
Well that's what you said,
But its all come to an end,
As I lie in my bed

I think about what I said,
Then I think about....us,
Over and over in my head,
I cant believe this happened in all this fuss.

You were mad at me,
And I was mad at you,
But I never thought this would be,
Do you want to keep talking too?

Now we are not friends,
But I wish we could be,
Never till the end,
Will you stop being mad at me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Aww hUn sUch an aMazing p0em!! hEarTfElt linEs!!! t0uching w0rDs! vEry welL writtEn!!

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    4/5, Nice but could use some refrasing I think. It just seems like something might be missing or could be said differently. I really like it though, so keep it up. :)

    God Bless
    Saiya

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I assume whichever friend you're reffering to in the poem has read it? Seems like the best course of action.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Now i read it i am wounderin gwhy this person is mad at you.. ummm well nice poem keep up the good work 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    This is simple & beautifully done !
    good job
    5/5
    love
    amy

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