Friends...yeh right

by Torn   Oct 6, 2005


How can i take you seriously,
When you change everyday.
You tell me that you care,
But then you just walk away.

It's driving me insane
All your pretending.
Just tell me the truth,
Quit all the deceiving.

You say you don't understand,
But don't you ever see?
At school I'm all alone,
There's no one around me.

Now the comments start,
And I feel so incredibly lame.
So I release my own way,
Now I'm filled with shame.

I'm not saying it's your fault,
I just want to know.
Why is it that you ignore me,
What have I done to be so low?

I try to understand you,
You know I really care.
I need to breakthrough,
So you can see that I'm there.

You're sick of me being like this,
How do you expect me to get out?
When you all treat me like s**t,
I just want to shout.

It's not that I'm angry,
It's just I'm so hurt inside.
That none of you could love me,
Now my feelings I shall subside.

*to all my 'friends'...
i think you know who you are...*please comment everyone...

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  • 18 years ago

    by ALEXIS

    I know i probably desereve to be, but i hope i'm not one of the friends you are talking about cause i do care and luv you... ALWAYS :P

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    My friends treat me that way too...and it sucks...but still I know there's some who will always be with me(but yet again...maybe not)...okey...
    whatever...this poem is nice...and we should all treat our friends...the way we want them to treat us...just so you know...I'm your friend...eventhough we never seen each other...but I think this friendship is true...unlike some of it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I know exactly how you feel like seriously exactly. this really spoke to me i felt like you were writing it about me lol thats cool to know other people feel the same, great rhyming great form the last line i wasnt in love with just because i think the way you worded it made subside sound like you were using it wrong

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow -jaw drops- wow hun this is fantastic, very well written I dont know what to say the language and the way its written, its just wow breath taking I dont know what to say, you did a great job, lovedd itt, keep it up hun lubb you

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Hun... i know i'm not there... but i miss you so much... i hope im not one of these "friends" you talk about... love you always... stay strong and take care,
    love me xoxoxo

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